lol I like when he falls to the ground xD! it difficulr btw
Melodie in 0:48 is really nice! the lead u used also was good one. For now on u just have to start making full songs and u will keep improving song by song reading people comments and learning tricks. 10/10 because you imrpoved a lot. Just one thing on this maybe the bass can be still bigger but thats just my opinionanyway great. where did you get the vocal samples? :P
A lot of fun
Why 9? because I think the bass u used first needs more power and the melodie was a bit repetitive anyway awesome job and if this is your first song then I´ll be your first fan cause to be your first work its great... I remmber my first song it was horrible :B
For your next song I recommend u using a better bass and making a longer melodie just that ;)
Yeah, I did hear that it needed a bit more power in the bass, and the melody is quite repetitive. Thanks though, your info is very well needed, none of my friends know what to say, so they just tell me if it's good or not. I'll try to add a bit more bass into it, and extend the melody a touch. Thanks a lot!
This is excellent piece man, I love the mistical ambient you created all fits well thats why I scored it 10. You maybe should add some vioices but not singing, just in the ambient :) I LIKE IT
Glad you like it! I would like to add voices, but thats just not my thing. It would have probably sounded awful with me doing it haha. Anyway I'm happy you enjoyed it and thanks for the review.
looks pretty awesome
Fav, this is some awesome shit!
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